The Elements Exploration: Linked Stories of Pain
Twelve-year-old Freya is visiting her distracted mother in Cornwall when she encounters 14-year-old twins. "Nothing better than knowing a secret," they tell her, "comes from possessing one of your own." In the weeks that follow, they will rape her, then inter her while living, a mix of nervousness and annoyance passing across their faces as they eventually free her from her improvised coffin.
This might have stood as the jarring focal point of a novel, but it's just one of numerous horrific events in The Elements, which collects four short novels – published distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters navigate past trauma and try to discover peace in the current moment.
Disputed Context and Thematic Exploration
The book's release has been marred by the inclusion of Earth, the second novella, on the candidate list for a significant LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, nearly all other nominees dropped out in protest at the author's gender-critical views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.
Conversation of LGBTQ+ matters is missing from The Elements, although the author explores plenty of significant issues. LGBTQ+ discrimination, the effect of conventional and digital platforms, parental neglect and sexual violence are all investigated.
Distinct Accounts of Pain
- In Water, a sorrowful woman named Willow transfers to a secluded Irish island after her husband is imprisoned for awful crimes.
- In Earth, Evan is a athlete on legal proceedings as an accessory to rape.
- In Fire, the grown-up Freya juggles vengeance with her work as a surgeon.
- In Air, a parent travels to a burial with his adolescent son, and ponders how much to reveal about his family's past.
Trauma is accumulated upon suffering as wounded survivors seem fated to encounter each other repeatedly for forever
Interconnected Narratives
Relationships multiply. We originally see Evan as a boy trying to leave the island of Water. His trial's panel contains the Freya who shows up again in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, partners with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Minor characters from one narrative resurface in cottages, taverns or courtrooms in another.
These narrative elements may sound tangled, but the author knows how to drive a narrative – his earlier popular Holocaust drama has sold many copies, and he has been rendered into numerous languages. His straightforward prose shines with suspenseful hooks: "after all, a doctor in the burns unit should understand more than to play with fire"; "the initial action I do when I reach the island is change my name".
Character Development and Storytelling Strength
Characters are sketched in concise, powerful lines: the compassionate Nigerian priest, the disturbed pub landlord, the daughter at war with her mother. Some scenes echo with melancholy power or observational humour: a boy is punched by his father after having an accident at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour swap insults over cups of diluted tea.
The author's ability of carrying you completely into each narrative gives the comeback of a character or plot strand from an prior story a real thrill, for the first few times at least. Yet the cumulative effect of it all is numbing, and at times almost comic: pain is layered with pain, coincidence on coincidence in a grim farce in which damaged survivors seem destined to bump into each other repeatedly for all time.
Thematic Complexity and Final Evaluation
If this sounds less like life and more like purgatory, that is element of the author's message. These wounded people are oppressed by the crimes they have experienced, caught in cycles of thought and behavior that stir and descend and may in turn hurt others. The author has spoken about the impact of his individual experiences of mistreatment and he portrays with compassion the way his ensemble navigate this perilous landscape, reaching out for solutions – isolation, cold ocean swims, resolution or bracing honesty – that might bring illumination.
The book's "basic" framing isn't extremely instructive, while the quick pace means the discussion of gender dynamics or online networks is primarily superficial. But while The Elements is a flawed work, it's also a thoroughly accessible, survivor-centered chronicle: a appreciated rebuttal to the common obsession on investigators and perpetrators. The author illustrates how trauma can permeate lives and generations, and how years and care can soften its aftereffects.